Another poem i wrote, looking for opinions?

Better structure, but still uses confusing language and images; like nightmares, fire and sky - how do I relate to those concepts as one? Confusing. I have never heard of the usage of "alike to" before. Better to da, "Nothing of this world can be likened to the happiness ......", or "nothing can mirror". What are beaten scars? "true clarity" of what? You did ont start off with the premise of anything being unclear. Keep trying - I think you'll get there, but you need training adn practice. I like the style.