Monday, July 11, 2011

Need opinions about my poem?

I think your poem is really deep, and detailed. I really like it!!! I actually think it is fantastic!!! But I was wondering about the part where you say, "As the angelic touch of your brings tears to my withered soul." What was the 'your' for??? I was just confused. But other then that, It was amazing. :)

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